Week 5 Thursday

This class was time for one on one critique and feedback from Lee and Fay. In gaining some feedback from Lee, she suggested that I take my own photographs for one of my final posters as I am currently using an image from the internet. It was also suggested that I try to work on the heading for my illustrative poster and make it more bold. At the moment, the illustrative poster has a lot going on all at once and it is distracting the eye from the main focus. Lee also suggested that I make the housing scene in the background smaller. I am also going to experiment with steampunk style by using smoke in my poster.




At the moment, Fay feels that my photographic poster is stronger and have more ihi. I just need to play around with the placement of the text as it is overlapping the gas mask at the moment. I also need to tighten up the fact section as the letters are quite spaced out at the moment.

 I will continue to work on the final touches of my 2 posters. I will also try and work on my heading for the other poster to make it stand out more.

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